Sheila on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Hi, Everyone!Please find attached a file with two resources in it. If you were at last month's meeting then you already have a copy of both.I will be sending out an email today with specific...
View ArticleSheila on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Well, it looks like there is a problem with the second attachment, so I'll have to figure out the problem! Stay tuned...
View ArticleSheila on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Step 1: What do you think that each paragraph of "Letter A" is trying to accomplish?Posts due by March 1st.
View Articleedkowalski on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
I can't meet at midnight, I turn into a were-writer. Letter A 1st par is an introduction then the purpose of the letter and name of the book. Is the first line appropriate? (cut to the chase?) 2nd par....
View ArticleJennali on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Without critique and skipping the first line:Paragraph 1 introduces the title of the picture book manuscript and indicates that it is a well written piece having been accepted to a professional...
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Below is what I think each paragraph is trying to accomplish:Paragraph 1: Informs the editor of the type of book and intended audience, as well as recognition the manuscript has receivedParagraph 2:...
View Articlestorytellerjt on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Paragraph 1-Introduces the title of the book and reveals that there has already been interest in it. Paragraph 2-A synopsis of the story. Paragraph 3-To show what makes this manuscript special and...
View ArticleSheila on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Wow! Great job, guys!!! Yes, each paragraph has its purpose, and while I normally wouldn't get too involved in describing the manuscript's form of writing, this particular work, I felt, needed some...
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Ty! Anyone else see the full moon last night? I became a were-writer, and I think I ate an agent.Query letter 2: sender addr should be on top, not at the end. Flush right? Recipient's full info below,...
View ArticleSheila on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Wasn't that a beautiful moon! I think you have a handle now, Ed! The "Were-Writer of NJCWG!" Agents beware! Note: I gave you a promotion. Both Ws are now capitalized. No need to thank me!
View ArticleMartin on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Below is my Letter B submission:Heading - Include Address. Greeting - Include Mr./Mrs. instead of both namesParagraph 1 - Perhaps start off with the book and a more formal tone; Include intended...
View ArticleSheila on "Round Robin Cover/Query Letter Critiques"
Hello, Ed and Martin!It looks like you guys are the last men standing. We seem to have lost the others along the way, so congratulations for getting this far! I have carefully read your comments, and...
View ArticleSheila on "CCA Deadine September 25th!"
Congratulations to everyone who made it through the first round of selections for our upcoming CCA event! Please know that you have a second chance to be part of this wonderful celebration of...
View ArticleSheila on "NJCWG October 20th Peddle's Village Event"
Hope to see everyone at our October 20th Peddler's Village event. By now you should have received a flyer from Michele with directions for where to meet up. Please reach out to her if you have...
View ArticleSheila on "BookRemarks Contest"
Good luck to all who enter the BookRemarks Contest this year! This year's theme "No, You Can't!" was submitted by NJCWG member Jennifer Ali and chosen as our winning title. Thanks Jen!Rules and...
View Articlesami131 on "Exciting Events for Writers"
This fall the Bridgewater Library is hosting a slew of wonderful events for writers of all ages. From panels and workshops featuring an array of local authors to a night of networking with the Society...
View ArticleSheila on "Snack List for NJCWG Bridgewater Group"
2012-2013 NJCWG BRIDGEWATER GROUP SNACK LIST: (Updated October 09, 2012)October: Martin (Jenn will cover) November: Tony December: Michele January 2013: Bob February: Danielle and Jack March: Clare...
View ArticleSheila on "NJCWG October 20th Peddle's Village Event"
Meet-up Details: We will be meeting at 11:30 am in the Chili's parking lot in Flemington and caravaning to Peddler's Village from there on October 20th.We will tour the scarecrow competition, window...
View Articlestorytellerjt on "Great Resource for Writers of Children's Books"
Hello everyone, I found a nice resource for writers of children's books. The website is http://www.institutechildrenslit.comI learned this interesting fact from the website:Out of every 100 new...
View ArticleSheila on "Great Resource for Writers of Children's Books"
This is an interesting fact, Jen. I personally know authors who have broken into the business by writing a science article, etc., for a children's magazine. Sometimes you just have to get your foot in...
View ArticleSheila on "Peddler's Village Trip"
It was great fun spending time with everyone at Peddler's Village yesterday! The weather could hardly have been nicer––a perfect fall day.If you would like to join the "Build Guilda" workshop (our...
View Articledrseuss on "Dr. Seuss: Living in Whoville"
Hi everyone! I'm Sally and new to the Children's Writer's Guild Forum. One of the very first books I read as a child was by Dr. Seuss and I've been a fan ever since. I've always imagined living in the...
View ArticleSheila on "Dr. Seuss: Living in Whoville"
Hello, Sally and welcome!I have read Movoto's clever article and invite other NJCWG members to take a look at it as well. It not only calculates the cost of living in Whoville which is an interesting...
View ArticleDecent4u on "Merry Christmas to all and Happy Holidays! Share a Memory"
Thats wonderful sharing check out christmas quotes, christmas greetings, christmas wishes,christmas funny sms, christmas sms text messages, christmas sms text, christmas sms jokes, christmas love messages
View Articlenuwriter2012 on "Children's Book Publishers No Upfront Fees"
I'm a new writer of children's book manuscripts. I need a legitimate publisher who does not charge upfront fees, as I do not have money for that. Have contacted Dorrance Publishing but they want $3990...
View ArticleSheila on "Children's Book Publishers No Upfront Fees"
Dear nuwriter2012,You seem to be conflating mainstream publishing, independent publishing, and vanity presses into one entity. Firstly, a mainstream publisher (distinct from a printing company) does...
View ArticleSheila on "Children's Book Publishers No Upfront Fees"
P.S. While I have no experience with his company, a very reliable source has recommended Ron Pramschufer and his Publishing Basics Newsletter. You might also benefit from reading his Publishing Basics...
View ArticleSheila on "Voting for BookRemarks Contest 2013"
Just a friendly reminder that all votes for the BookRemarks Writing Contest are due January 31st by midnight. Voting is open to all NJCWG members and BookRemarks competitors MUST vote (just not for...
View ArticleSheila on "Snack List for NJCWG Bridgewater Group"
Please find updated snack roster starting March 2013.Thanks!
View Articlessligh on "What is the format that publishers want your paintings or original...
I’m on disability benefits and trying to get off disability by writing, particularly I'm writing a children's book about a boy who can suddenly fly. I'm an artist, so I will do the paintings for the...
View ArticleSheila on "What is the format that publishers want your paintings or original...
Dear Stephen,First, let me wish you the very best in your endeavors. You are to be commended for your efforts to live independently.I want you to know, however, that trying to make a living...
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